Feedback for the LVM post on my blog

I just started a blog and published my first blog post about Logical Volume Management. I'm new to documenting my work, so I'd really appreciate any feedback on the content, clarity, or writing style in general. This site is a mix of a blog and a portfolio. Since I'm new to all of this, it would be great to get some feedback on whether this post works well just as a blog post, or if it actually holds up as a portfolio project too, before I keep writing more. www.mvtechblog.com Thanks in advance.